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| 제목 | I'm going to explain about Elon Musk. | 등록일 | 2020-11-20 |
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| 내용 | I met my younger friend yesterday. We usually drink when we meet. I'm going to explain about Elon Musk. Elon Musk is a representative of Tesla, OPEN AI, space x. People highly value his spirit of challenge. So Tesla shares rose 800 percent. Tesla is an electric car that the world trusts. Most people only think Elon Musk is a representative of Tesla. So many people don't know if he is the representative of OPEN AI. He is also making great achievements in creating artificial intelligence. For example, when we talk to a computer, we create the results of coding and novels that fit it. |
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| 담당강사 | Jean | 등록일 | 2020-11-23 |
| 첨삭 내용 | I met my younger friend yesterday. I met my younger friend yesterday. We usually drink when we meet. I'm going to explain about Elon Musk. Elon Musk is a representative of Tesla, OPEN AI, space x. Elon Musk is a representative of Tesla, OPEN AI, space x. People value his spirit towards challenges. So Tesla shares rose to 800 percent. Most people only think Elon Musk is a representative of Tesla. Most people only think Elon Musk is just a representative of Tesla. So many people don't know if he is the representative of OPEN AI So many people don't know if he is the representative of an OPEN AI He is also making great achievements in creating artificial intelligence. He is also making great achievements in creating artificial intelligence. For example, when we talk to a computer, we create the results of coding and novels that fit it. For example, when we talk to a computer, we create the results of coding and novels that fits it. -------------------------------------- Hi Andy, Thank you for educating me about Eton Musk. Now I have an idea who is the man behind Tesla. Regards Jean |
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